Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of good. Other argue that customers should avoid buying good with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Governemnt
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Government
passed many
ruls
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rules
about
banned
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banning
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plastic
materials But
unfortunetely
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unfortunately
, people or makers did not follow
it
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them
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. most masses believe that makers and multicomplex stores have the responsibility to increase the number of packaging of goods.
while
,
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apply
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numberous
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numerous
consumers
argure
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argue
that customers should stop buying
good
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goods
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with huge
of
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apply
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packaging
products
.
My
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In my
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opinion
that is
a very serious issue for our
eniverment
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enlivenment
So, In
this
essay will discuss both sides and
point
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points
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of
views
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view
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. Primarily, Companies used a lot of packaging
for
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to
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save their
products
and they used many
unessary
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unnecessary
things
for
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to
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make
more
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them more
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attracktive
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attractive
, So that
earn
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earns
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huge money
to
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for
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customers because most of the clients only buy the
products
for as
attracking
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attacking
attracting
at tracking
things if they need
or
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them or
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not. If makers sell
over
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apply
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packaging
products
in
market
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the market
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their
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it
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is not only
thier
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their
fault
as well as
consumer
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a consumer
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also
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are also
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reponseable
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responsible
for it. The reason is customers
why
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who
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did buy it
they
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apply
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need to stop buying it.
For example
, In the past
years
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,years
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government banned
plastic
carrybags
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carry bags
.
Although
, many shopkeepers are using
plastic
materials for carrying and packing.
However
,
consumer
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consumers
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also
buy it without any
hysitation
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hesitation
hesitations
. I think, Only government
did
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apply
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not
responseable
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responsible
for it we are
also
responsiable
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responsible
.
Furthermore
, Nowadays, Courier companies are using a lot of packaging
for
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to
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save their product
while
the
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they
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will use paper, jut and sweet grass as packaging and it is
ECO
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an ECO
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friedly
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friendly
concept.
However
, authorities take strong steps to make
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the ECO
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ECO friendly
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ECO-friendly
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system,
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but unfortunetely
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unfortunetely
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unfortunately
, plentiful people did not support it.
Such
as
consumer
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consumers
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buy
vegetable
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vegetables
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to shop they reuse their bag for shopping as
masses
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the masses
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avoid
over packaging
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over-packaging
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products
.
For example
,
plastic
items did not
distroy
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destroy
easily, It is
biggest
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the biggest
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reason
of
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for
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air pollution, water pollution,
soil
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and soil
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pollution. many animals eat
plastic
bags thats
reason
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the reason
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animals face serious health issues.
To
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In
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conclusion, If government take
actions
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action
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against
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apply
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to make ECO friendly
so
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apply
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It is our responsibility that
we
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be
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involve
to protect
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protecting
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the envirnement
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envirnement
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environment
.
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