A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake When giving contact details, you do NOT need to write any addresses; something like the name of a friend you are staying with or a holiday destination is fine.

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Dear Jun, How are you? I hope you're doing well. Thank you so much for agreeing to help me take care of my house next week.

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, there are several things that I have to inform you. I want to tell you about my contact details when I am away for my monthly medical check-up.

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home address is on 23rd Santonio St behind the shopping mall, and please contact me through my phone number +12 34567 if any problem arises. As you know that I raise a dog in my house and if I remember correctly, you used to work in pet care right? so please help me take care of my pet, he doesn't need any particular treatment and all you need do to is just

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with him and give him some snacks. I greatly appreciate

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your help if you can help me do a little household chores, so let me explain

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the details.

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, I was too busy recently so I didn't have time to clean my living room and I would be grateful if you can help me clean it.

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the storage room that you can use. Thank you so much for your help and I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards, Lim

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