You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Mehta, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am a student of the language learning course which is running in the evening slot by you. I am writing

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letter to inform you that I will not attend classes by 20th June because of a couple of reasons. Even though I enjoy a lot to learning from you.

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a new project in the company, I have to take care of a lot of responsibilities and they want me to do work for extra hours

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work on weekends

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to complete our work within a deadline.

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, I have a plan to visit Turkey next month because of the official task. In light of above mention situation, I would like to you allow me to complete

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course next term I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Mili

gadhiya

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Madhya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

155 words

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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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