Some believe that it is good for a country's culture to import films and TV programs, while others think it is better for a Country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, there are many different
films
and
TV
programmes which can influence individuals in different ways. A part of
people
stand for
to import
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importing
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films
and
TV
shows from different countries is positive for their country's cultural heritage.
However
, others do not share the same idea,
on the contrary
, they believe it can affect their culture badly. I believe
people
can learn from each
others
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other
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and grow their
cultures
in a good way. Importing visual materials from various nations might
broad
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citizens's
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minds and improve their knowledge about foreign lifestyles. They can easily analyse differences between their
cultures
and other cultural heritages. Eventually, they have a chance to improve their cultural cumulation with different approaches which are learnt from other communities.
For example
, Muslims are the first groups who were brushing their tooths
hundreds
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years ago. Catholic soldiers believed they only
brushing
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their tooths because they want to sharpen their tooths for their victims. After a brief
observation
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they realized
this
behavior
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behaviour
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was only done for
hygenic
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hygienic
reasons and imported tooth
brush
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brushes
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and
tooth paste
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toothpaste
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into their daily lives. Watching and learning different cultural activities might negatively affect
because
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them because
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all
cultures
have their unique events,
therefore
, comparison between these events can result in dissatisfaction to an audience.
For example
, a Non-christian boy might learn about
Halloween
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the Halloween
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holiday
,
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and all candies which are collected throughout the event from television. If his culture
do
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not
has
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have
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activities or holidays for children's joy he might be
jelous
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jealous
about being Christian or American.
Moreover
, society is always happy to watch their own habits in movies and
TV
programmes.
Nevertheless
, my opinion is these behaviours are limited and
people
should focus on the positive aspects of all
cultures
. In conclusion, many
people
believe watching different cultural activities on
TV
or
films
can affect their habits positively,
while
others think that it is harmful
for
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to
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their culture and should only have their own
films
and
TV
programmes. From my point of view, individuals can definitely contribute something
into
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to
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their
cultures
from different countries.
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