In many countries, imprisonment is the most common solution to crime. However, some people believe that better education will be effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary centuries, after asserting the importance of human rights, imprisonment has become the most dominant applicable law to combat the

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some experts emphasise that the best

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for significantly diminishing the

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rate is better

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, others argue that there are more effective solutions to eradicate crimes.

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I agree with the former opinion,and I am partially compatible with the latter argument.

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with, there is a public consensus that

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plays a quintessential role in

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development.

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,

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contributes

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enriching the human mind intellectually, cultivating people, and building and presenting a wide range of proper models to the communities. If the professors illustrate the negative aspects that learners would challenge in their forthcoming future and how they can encounter constraints,

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will boost them mentally and culturally to cope with their potential challenges positively.

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I agree that learning has a crucial role to eliminate

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illegal activities. In sharp contrast, I

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disagree that

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is the only

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to alleviate the offenders. There are other factors in the community that may lead to crimes.

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, the dysfunctional families, the current economic recession emerges as

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and financial issues .

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, it could be because of psychological disorders that

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criminal toward eccentric and horrendous behaviours.

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, recently, people witness in the media some

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figures from teenagers

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high school and in

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advanced countries.

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, increasingly the fraud and robbery phenomena are accentuated under the prevailing economic climate.

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why I believe that imprisonment could be a better

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in some cases to avoid havoc. In conclusion,

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I agree with the common viewpoint that

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is considered a plausible

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to combat

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rate,

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learning contributes properly to nurturing students intellectually, personally and culturally. I am

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of the belief that imprisonment is substantial in other cases to avoid increasing havoc in society and achieve stability.