In many countries, imprisonment is the most common solution to crime. However, some people believe that better education will be effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary centuries, after asserting the importance of human rights, imprisonment has become the most dominant applicable law to combat the

crime

rate.

Although

some experts emphasise that the best

solution

for significantly diminishing the

crime

rate is better

education

, others argue that there are more effective solutions to eradicate crimes.

However

I agree with the former opinion,and I am partially compatible with the latter argument.

To begin

with, there is a public consensus that

education

plays a quintessential role in

society

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development.

In other words

,

education

contributes

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enriching the human mind intellectually, cultivating people, and building and presenting a wide range of proper models to the communities. If the professors illustrate the negative aspects that learners would challenge in their forthcoming future and how they can encounter constraints,

this

will boost them mentally and culturally to cope with their potential challenges positively.

Thus

I agree that learning has a crucial role to eliminate

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illegal activities. In sharp contrast, I

also

disagree that

education

is the only

solution

to alleviate the offenders. There are other factors in the community that may lead to crimes.

Likewise

, the dysfunctional families, the current economic recession emerges as

hindrance

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and financial issues .

Furthermore

, it could be because of psychological disorders that

motivates

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criminal toward eccentric and horrendous behaviours.

For example

, recently, people witness in the media some

crime

figures from teenagers

at

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high school and in

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advanced countries.

In addition

, increasingly the fraud and robbery phenomena are accentuated under the prevailing economic climate.

That is

why I believe that imprisonment could be a better

solution

in some cases to avoid havoc. In conclusion,

Although

I agree with the common viewpoint that

education

is considered a plausible

solution

to combat

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rate,

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learning contributes properly to nurturing students intellectually, personally and culturally. I am

also

of the belief that imprisonment is substantial in other cases to avoid increasing havoc in society and achieve stability.