U recently attended short course at college and left an electronic device behind in the classroom. Write an email to the course administrator. In your letter 1-Give details of the course u attended and explain what happened. 2-Describe the device and where u left it 3- Tell the course administrator what would u like him to do

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Hello Sir I am writing to thank you for offering me an opportunity to attend the

course

on Investment in Securities and seek your assistance in taking my

laptop

in your custody that I left in the classroom. The

course

was comprehensive and explained very well and has provided me with deep insights into the Canadian share market. I had my

laptop

with me during

this

course

as I thought I might have to record some significant information;

however

, I was pleased that we were provided with brochures to save time in taking notes. As I was so much into learning;

at the end

of the

course

, I left my place immediately so that I can thank the faculty member for sharing

such

significant information. I cannot imagine that I completely forgot about my Apple

laptop

kept on the

last

table of the classroom which is of black colour with a sticker of my name on it. I request you to please have a look into

this

matter and ensure that my

laptop

is in safe hands. I will be paying a visit next Monday to collect it. I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused to you. Hoping for positive actions on your end Yours faithfully Gurjot Kaur cher.

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