U recently attended short course at college and left an electronic device behind in the classroom. Write an email to the course administrator. In your letter 1-Give details of the course u attended and explain what happened. 2-Describe the device and where u left it 3- Tell the course administrator what would u like him to do

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Hello Sir I am writing to thank you for offering me an opportunity to attend the

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on Investment in Securities and seek your assistance in taking my

laptop

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in your custody that I left in the classroom. The

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was comprehensive and explained very well and has provided me with deep insights into the Canadian share market. I had my

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with me during

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course

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as I thought I might have to record some significant information;

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, I was pleased that we were provided with brochures to save time in taking notes. As I was so much into learning;

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of the

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, I left my place immediately so that I can thank the faculty member for sharing

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significant information. I cannot imagine that I completely forgot about my Apple

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kept on the

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table of the classroom which is of black colour with a sticker of my name on it. I request you to please have a look into

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matter and ensure that my

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is in safe hands. I will be paying a visit next Monday to collect it. I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused to you. Hoping for positive actions on your end Yours faithfully Gurjot Kaur cher.

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