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Nowadays, children and teenager play more and more computer games. Parents think computer games have little value and more harmful effects. What's opinion?

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In today's generation, younger ones play more
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 on a
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 rather than going out.
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games
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 have many side effects. In my opinion, if a person is playing
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games
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 he/she may have weak eyesight and their body is not
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 not physically fit. Nowadays,
children
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 like to play all types of video
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 as these
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 provide an adrenaline rush to the brains which are liked by them. But they know the other side of it, as playing virtual
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 for too long may increase their chances of putting high-power glasses on their eyes.
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, in today's era,
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 have glasses so thick at an early age because of the excess screen time, but if you see a decade ago,
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 of the same age at that time had their eyes so sharp they didn't require glasses.
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, the limitation of playing
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 is that one has to sit in one place and play.
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, there is a rapid increase in obesity cases in
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. They just sit in one place and play
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 all time which affects their body physically as they do not do any exercise to work their body properly, by which they suffer many problems as their immune system is not good as the
children
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 who are physically fit. In conclusion, playing
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games
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 does not have any value as they didn't teach anything. If you want
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 to learn any values like teamwork and leadership qualities these things can be thought by playing physically.
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