The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reposting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reposting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps below show an
island
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, before and after the
construction
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of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reposting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The given maps illustrate the
island
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before and after the refurbishment of some tourist amenities.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that lots of accommodations and some facilities were built after the
construction
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, and the road and transport track are
also
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constructed. Looking at the information in more detail, before the
construction
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, there were only trees on each side of the
island
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and a beach in the west.
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, the
island
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was surrounded by the sea. Those still remain the same after the
construction
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. If we look at after-development, the accommodations are located between a restaurant and a receptionist. Those accommodation's shapes are circular and those connect with the footpath
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the restaurant and the receptionist link with a vehicle track. The swimming area builds near the beach.
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, there is a pier to access sailing where two ships are available.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, construction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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