Libraries are a waste of money, therefore, computers should be used to replace them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people are of the opinion that
libraries
funding should be cut and the money invested in making computers available to the public Change the noun form
library
instead
. I mostly agree with this
line of thought and the following paragraphs shall explain why this
is the case. Firstly
, libraries should not receive any more funding because they contain such
a limited and often outdated amount of information. As soon as a book is published it goes out of date and cannot be updated without an entirely new copy being printed which is both costly and time-consuming. On the other hand
, a computer connected to the internet overcomes both of these limitations with ease, for example
, any web-site
, pdf, or online journal can be continuously updated by the authors and there is no time wasted in printing Correct your spelling
website
of
the book. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, though, libraries do still offer a quiet place for members of the public to go and read. In today’s fastpaced
Correct your spelling
fast-paced
society
there are few places to be found where people can simply go and relax without fear of being hassled by Add a comma
society,
salesman
or traffic which may have damaging consequences for the public. Correct article usage
a salesman
For instance
, a report in the ‘Journal of Good Health’
recently reported that spending as little as 5 minutes per day Change noun form
Health
sat
quietly on your own can reduce the risk of a heart attack or stroke by 50%, so, losing the quiet space of a library could harm a nation’s Wrong verb form
sitting
overall
health. To sum up
, the public need for up to date
information and Add a hyphen
up-to-date
also
for restful places for people to relax needs to be considered carefully. Governments need to decide what their priority is and act accordingly
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion