Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart displays how many
tourists
from 2010 to 2017 visited an Island
called the Caribbean.
Overall
, the number of visitors
rose who were staying on cruise
ships
while
the number of visitors
who were staying on the Island
were fluctuating. Nonetheless
, the total number of tourists
was significantly surging in the given period
.
At the beginning of the period
, most tourists
preferred to stay on Island
till the year 2013 which welcomed around 1 million
visitors
whereas
, people who stayed on Cruise
ships
were comparatively lower ranging below 0.5 Million
tourists
. However
, after 2013, visitors
living on cruise
ships
drastically started to grow and between the year 2016, they surpassed the visitors
who preferred to stay on the Island
and by the end of the period
, it relatively jumped to more than 2 million
visitors
and those who didn't stay on cruise
ships
were at 1.5 million
.
Furthermore
, over the period
there was no drop in visiting the Caribbean Island
from tourists
and it moderately inclined to almost 3.5 Million
visitors
in total.Submitted by Melroy on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, visitors, cruise, ships, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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