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Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart displays how many
tourists
 from 2010 to 2017 visited an
Island
 called the Caribbean.
Overall
, the number of
visitors
 rose who were staying on
cruise
ships
while
 the number of
visitors
 who were staying on the
Island
 were fluctuating.
Nonetheless
, the total number of
tourists
 was significantly surging in the given
period
. At the beginning of the
period
, most
tourists
 preferred to stay on
Island
 till the year 2013 which welcomed around 1
million
visitors
whereas
, people who stayed on
Cruise
ships
 were comparatively lower ranging below 0.5
Million
tourists
.
However
, after 2013,
visitors
 living on
cruise
ships
 drastically started to grow and between the year 2016, they surpassed the
visitors
 who preferred to stay on the
Island
 and by the end of the
period
, it relatively jumped to more than 2
million
visitors
 and those who didn't stay on
cruise
ships
 were at 1.5
million
.
Furthermore
, over the
period
 there was no drop in visiting the Caribbean
Island
 from
tourists
 and it moderately inclined to almost 3.5
Million
visitors
 in total.
Submitted by Melroy  on

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