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Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart displays how many
tourists
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 from 2010 to 2017 visited an
Island
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 called the Caribbean.
Overall
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, the number of
visitors
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 rose who were staying on
cruise
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ships
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while
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 the number of
visitors
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 who were staying on the
Island
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 were fluctuating.
Nonetheless
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, the total number of
tourists
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 was significantly surging in the given
period
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, most
tourists
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 preferred to stay on
Island
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 till the year 2013 which welcomed around 1
million
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visitors
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whereas
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, people who stayed on
Cruise
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ships
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 were comparatively lower ranging below 0.5
Million
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tourists
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.
However
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, after 2013,
visitors
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 living on
cruise
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ships
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 drastically started to grow and between the year 2016, they surpassed the
visitors
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 who preferred to stay on the
Island
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 and by the end of the
period
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, it relatively jumped to more than 2
million
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visitors
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 and those who didn't stay on
cruise
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ships
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 were at 1.5
million
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.
Furthermore
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, over the
period
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 there was no drop in visiting the Caribbean
Island
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 from
tourists
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 and it moderately inclined to almost 3.5
Million
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visitors
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 in total.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, visitors, cruise, ships, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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