In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. Why is this the case? Suggest some solutions.
It is commonly argued that elderly
people
does not receive enough respect by others. I believe that there are variety of factors that causing make this
statement
become a case. In my personal view, it would be provided in this
paraghraph.
Firstly
, it because of the poor level of education
of some countries, this
means that the carelessly education
or don't focus on these kind of basic ritual, students or teenages did such
a embarassing things like this
. For example
: America is one
of the most develop nation in the world, with tons of enterprise, schools... However
, a country like this
have a lot
of case that have been happen that relate to this
statement
, they become disrespect to the people
that are older than them and go wild, according to
a page, about 30% of this
situations
have happen in one
year, and USA leading at the first place. Secondly
, it maybe the distortion mindset of the populations that leading to this
. In fact, due to
some environment when a children being raised is affect to them a lot
, which make them become unruly and deviant. One
child couldn't make the world worst, but how about 100 different child who have the same situations
? The consequences will be unpredictable. For instance
: Vietnam is a country still develop. Therefore
, there will be a lot
of gap that still can not fill, a lot
of family in Vietnam have antiquated thought, the child who under family being imposed to get into line. Gradually, their form resistance and make wrong things, including disrespect elderly people
.
There a lot
of solutions that we can used to solve this
problems. First way is to improve the education
, by developing and study from those countries that have such
positive results in this
kind of situations
, the whole situations
will changed. One
of the standard example is: Japan used to have such
a poor and nasty education
in the past, but time by time, thank to the development of technology and changes a lot
in customs, Japan have become the countries that have the highest education
, they really respect the elderly people
and it really noticeable. Next is open a lot
of couses that teach basic manners, this
will be a really effective way to improve the statement
. Example: nowadays, there a lot
of courses that being opened for not only children but also
teenagers and adults to cultivate the knowledge, this
help people
to expierience and improve the manners of each individuals.
In conclusions, although
there a lot
of situations
that relate to this
statement
, but i believe there will be solutions to solving all this
problems.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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