The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times

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The two maps illustrate the

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modifications

modification

in Nelson

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within a time span from 2000 till today. There have been extensive modifications in terms of construction and replacement. One of the considerable transformations in the

City

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was construction. The hall of residence was added to the northwest corner of

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map. The new covered market is situated above a thoroughfare that crosses the lower part of the

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and is intended for only pedestrians was not available in 2000. In ,addition the restaurant and bars and clubs were constructed into the port by today. The

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modernizations were the new train station and tramline that were added between the university and the

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centre. Another striking change in Nelson

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was replacing. The old market which was situated on the west corner of the

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centre was switched with the new shop during revisions that are occurring in recent years.

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2000

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there were some trees in the north corner of the map

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a new shopping centre is now replaced in its place.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

175 words

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The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times

In many countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, a pencil, or a brush. What are the reasons for this? Is the decline in writing by hand a positive or negative development?

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages ?

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime? Do you agree or disagree?