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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

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In society nowadays,
people
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 commonly judge wealth and material as parameters to able hold the title of
success
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. I believe fortune is one of the factors that can make
people
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successful individuals.
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,
success
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 can mean anything depending on the
people
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 who interpret the meaning of the victory, which is not always related to finances.
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success
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.
To begin
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 with, entrepreneurs are common to hear about
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, which means victory will bring more ease to gain networking and
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 public trust in general.
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, by increasing their network and trust, the entrepreneurs can easily
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expand their business and influence globally. To illustrate, businessmen
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are generally known as competent and have a lot of assets,
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,
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businessmen will be more easily believed by
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 who desire to develop their first business.
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, collecting money and assets is little half of the purpose of
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prosperity
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, but the
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 will not matter
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 if entrepreneurs are not capable to help each other because capable of helping one another is more meaningful than
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success
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 itself.
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, if
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 was frequently associated with assets and fortunes,
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, there would be many
people
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 who could not afford to achieve
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, since there are many ways to interpret the meaning of
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. To exemplify, the
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 of parents who work hard and do not care about their spare time in order to collect much in earnings because solely these are done in order to support their children financially.
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, the parents are exactly to see their kids graduate from trustworthy universities and achieve their dreams, so that the meaning of
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 is not only derived from riches but
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 could be from
persistence
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 of our relatives, and there are many ways to be able to
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success
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.
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, Many
people
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 believe
success
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 cannot be separated from riches and material things themselves, but I realize there are other ways to achieve
prosperity
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 in our lives.
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