The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The display diagram describes how solar
panels
can be useful to give
electricity
for domestic use. The data is explained below.
Firstly
, solar
panels
is
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are
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place
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placed
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to the top. The solar
panels
, absorb energy from the sun and turn it into DC current.
Then
Inverter
,
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converts DC current
intp
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into
AC current and controls the
electricity
and
producation
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production
.
However
then
, electrical panel,
this
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apply
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distributes the
electricity
to the home and houses.
This
utility meter, any excess solar
electricity
will flow back to the grid through
thr
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the
meter.
Thus
,
utility
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the utility
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grid,
provide
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provides
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electricity
when you exceed the amount produced by the solar
panels
.
This
information
is describe
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from
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the lecturer. Solar
panels
consume power
then
they give light.
For example
, The diagram
contrain
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contain
the example about a street light.
To conclude
, the above information describes the report. There are main 5 processes for
this
. The above data show information about the lecturer.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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