The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The display diagram describes how solar
panels
can be useful to give electricity
for domestic use. The data is explained below.
Firstly
, solar panels
is
Change the verb form
are
place
to the top. The solar Wrong verb form
placed
panels
, absorb energy from the sun and turn it into DC current. Then
Inverter,
converts DC current Remove the comma
apply
intp
AC current and controls the Correct your spelling
into
electricity
and producation
. Correct your spelling
production
However
then
, electrical panel, this
distributes the Correct pronoun usage
apply
electricity
to the home and houses. This
utility meter, any excess solar electricity
will flow back to the grid through thr
meter. Correct your spelling
the
Thus
, utility
grid, Correct article usage
the utility
provide
Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
electricity
when you exceed the amount produced by the solar panels
. This
information is describe
Change the verb form
is described
from
the lecturer. Solar Change preposition
by
panels
consume power then
they give light. For example
, The diagram contrain
the example about a street light.
Correct your spelling
contain
To conclude
, the above information describes the report. There are main 5 processes for this
. The above data show information about the lecturer.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, electricity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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