It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?
In the past, everybody bought all types of goods at local commerce. Nowadays, many facilities arrived
due to
technology giving more options for shopping. And because of this
, local shops
are losing their clients
. This
essay will argue the possibility of how local communities have been affected and the possible solution to this
.
Firstly
, e-commerce and chain stores stand out as significant consumer preferences due to
the low prices or the discount to buy bulk-by goods. And because of this
, small local shops
have difficulty competing and, consequently
, the profit margin decreases, making it difficult to maintain the place. For instance
, after the great supermarket and utility shops
arrived in Angra dos Reis city in Rio de Janeiro, 20% of small local shops
closed. Therefore
, e-commerce and chain stores are unquestionably changing how sales are made, and many local shops
have been affected.
Indeed, technology modifies the behavior
of consumers in general. Change the spelling
behaviour
However
, with the local government incentives and investment in personalized customer service by local entrepreneurs, the situation mentioned above could be transformed. For example
, there is a building shop in Angra dos Reis city where the excellent treatment of their clients
is crucial, and many clients
prefer to go there than the other place. Hence
, if tradespeople invest in their clients
and obtain government incentives, this
business's feasibility will be high.
In summary, the competition between online shops
, big chain stores, and local shops
is enormous, and there is a considerable advantage in prices and quantity to the two first places, but if local entrepreneurs receive the government's facilities and improve the personalized treatment their business could not be affected too much.Submitted by rmantunes on
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