The chart below compares the percentages of tourism dollars spent in different economic sectors in two time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents data on the percentages of revenue (in dollars) generated by the travelling industry in 4 various sectors of the economy between 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, among the 4 sectors (Polyester, Linking Words
Cotton
, Cellulosic, and Wool) that have effected by tourism, Polyester and Use synonyms
Cotton
registered an increase Use synonyms
while
Cellulosic plateaued for most of the period and Wool saw a marginal fall.
Starting off with the sectors that experienced a rise, Polyester had stood at 5 Linking Words
million
tonnes in 1980. Use synonyms
This
sector rocketed to become a little shy of 70 Linking Words
million
overtaking Use synonyms
Cotton
in 1995 to become the textile with the highest demand. In second place was Use synonyms
Cotton
, which had started at roughly 13 Use synonyms
million
, and registered a steady climb to finish at a little over 30 Use synonyms
million
.
Turning to Cellulosic business, experienced a plateau over the first two decades, and Use synonyms
then
marginally increased: from approximately 3 Linking Words
million
in 1980 to circa 10 Use synonyms
million
in 2015. Use synonyms
lastly
, Wool was the only sector undergone a decline starting at a little under 3 Linking Words
million
to reach roughly 1 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
at the end
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