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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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] In the past ,life
people
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knowledge
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 from
books
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, but nowadays,
knowledge
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 is obtained from the
Internet
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 .
People
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 can easily take new information from the
internet
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 if they want to know a new thing they enter the
internet
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 and search for
knowledge
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 in which they are interested
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. Nowadays, the world is developed so children or adults can take their phone, amount of
books
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 with different themes. And
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people
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 do not spend their time reading whole
books
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 so they can obtain from the
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 it is the best way to get a lot of useful
knowledge
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. On the
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, the information always, do not be true And in the
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 period, readers get their
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 is contained in
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, but you read
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 book and get the thing which you wanted and
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a lot of social media so
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 wrote the
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 to the
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 readers. read from them. in the past
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 was contained in
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 but nowadays everything is developed. And useful
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 or information uploaded to the
internet
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • democratization, accessibility, socioeconomic barriers, dissemination, real-time, misinformation, misleading, necessitating, over-reliance, traditional knowledge sources, collaborative learning, interactive, engaging educational experience
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