The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line chart illustrates
average
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the average
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Co2 footprint per individual in four countries including the
UK
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal over 40 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
Uk
aand
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and
Sweden showed
declined
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in
amount
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the amount
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of Co2
emissions
during
given
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the given
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period ,
while
Italy and Portugal showed
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an increased
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increased
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.
Furthermore
, the highest country in
amount
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the amount
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of
green house
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gas was the
UK
,
whereas
lowest
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the lowest
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country was Portugal. Looking at
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the chart
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in more detail, from 1967 to 2007 the
Uk
was the highest
amount
of carbon dioxide (Co2)
emissions
from approximately 11 to 9.
In contrast
, Portugal was the lowest
amount
of Co2
emissions
almost from 1 to 5.5. Regarding other countries, Sweden reached a peak of
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the amount
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of Co2
emissions
at
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1997 around 10.2 and
then
showed
decreased
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to almost 5.6 in 2017. In comparison, from 1997 to 2007 Italy was the second country
release
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Co2
emissions
from approximately 6.2 to 7.8.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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