Some people prefer to use energy-saving modes of transportation like hybrid cars and bicycles. Others prefer the usual mode of transportation like buses and trains because it is fast and efficient. Which mode of transportation do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, we are unfortunately facing a big problem with pollution,
this
is a consequence of the dramatically increasing
number of
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population and the
use
and the necessity of more public transport. The population is now split in two; those who prefer to
use
environment-friendly modes of transportation and those who still prefer buses and trains. I personally prefer to
use
bicycles and hybrid cars to move around the city and in
this
,essay I will explain my reasons.
First,
the main reason for me is that an electric car or a bicycle does not release in the environment any dangerous substance. I, usually, go to work with my e-bike, and I am very proud of it
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because I am doing my part to save the planet; It is cleaner, funnier and I reckon even faster. It is
also
much cheaper, I don'
t
pay for tickets and fuel, and the same is applicable to electric cars,
ineed
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indeed
need
I need
if you
use
electric mode it costs you just 10$ to make 450km
instead
of an average of 80$ if you
use
diesel or gasoline. So I truly believe that using eco-friendly methods is much better.
Furthermore
, people believe that public transports are faster, but I have to disagree with that. I think that if you count the
time
that takes to go to the bus or train station, the waiting
time
and the actual
time
of the trip
in addition
to the fact that
then
you have to reach walking your destination,
at the end
of the day, it is not that faster, but it can take you more than drive you own electric car or
bycicle
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bicycle
.
Also
, often they are very busy or running late.
For example
, I live in a very busy area close to the beach, and in
summertimetime
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summertime time
summer time time
, if for any reason I need to take the bus, I need to wait a long
time
for it, and most of the
time
, buses don'
t
even stop because they are already full of people and cannot legally carry more; Isn'
t
that stressful and frustrating? And most important side in the
last
25 years,
according to
a study by the University of Melbourne, pollution is increased by a horrifying 33%, and
this
is a consequence of the thousands of buses and trains that every day go back and forth in the city.
This
is why I think that public transports are not a good option when you need to move around the city. In
this
essay, I argued and discussed the reasons why I think people should move to
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environment-friendly method of transport and
use
maybe the public ones just in case of emergency. Luckily it looks like It is gonna happen soon, thanks to car companies that started promoting and producing just electric cars or hybrid ones. In my ,opinion it is a much better option, for all the aforementioned reasons, to do our part to save the planet,
while
we are still on
time
, and don'
t
use
public transport.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
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