Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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universities around the world have seen that
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college admission priority has been preferably given to males than females. In doing so it isn’t fair for the females, rather an equal opportunity has to be provided for both genders
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and choosing their subjects. I do agree with equality despite the challenges faced by humanity.
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with, in the learning stages whatever subjects, are taught in the classes, should not be of
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bias. It has to be learned and applied practically by the students. In schools or
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, everyone should be aware of sensational talks on
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inequity treating
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as average performers. Given the chance irrespective of
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, everyone has the capability to learn and perform at maximum level. Some people argue that in certain
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like, engineering
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, admission priority has been given more to males than females, considering that
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possess less intellectual capability than men. In that instance, the social stigmatization of
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inequality will continue to prevail. To prevent
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disharmony in society an equal opportunity has to be given to both sexes. For ,instance in some
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around the world,
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have overtaken some of the male students that’s why now the number of female pilots is on the rise.
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people believed that
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are physically incompetent against men. Given the chance and their effort in combating wrong statements against them, nothing showed impossible for women to prove them wrong. Nowadays in military ,
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the number of female army officers is on the rise, showing people that offering equal opportunity is a must.
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, as I have mentioned in the above paragraphs both genders have an equal mental and physical capability to learn and bring changes in the system.
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all the
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and schools should accept the same number of male and female students in all the subjects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • social balance
  • affirmative action
  • gender imbalances
  • meritocracy
  • gender quotas
  • gender stereotypes
  • career segregation
  • demographic
  • inclusive
  • fluctuations
  • applicant numbers
  • cultural shifts
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