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what are the pron and cons of using public transport?

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public
transport
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an
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 essential service in every
countries
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, which is a key facility
to
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people
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the people
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 of the
nation
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. It has a lot of advantages and disadvantages.
this
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 essay will discuss the pros and cons of utilizing public
transport
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. On the one hand, the great upper hand of using public
transport
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 is that it can be
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 at a reasonable amount of money.
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, in Srilanka, they are providing public
transport
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 with an appropriate amount of money, which is possible to obtain by all
people
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 of the country. It might help to overcome
from
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financial issues among the poor
people
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 of the
nation
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.
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,
usage
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 of public
transport
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 by
people
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,
creats
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creates
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the governent
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governent
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government
, which may help to
financial
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the financial
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 growth of the state.
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, if
people
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 make use of public
transport
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,
department
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the department
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 of
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transport
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 might increase in
weight
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the weight
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 of
economical
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 growth.
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 of
thet
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this
, the
nation
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 may strongly improve
their
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 financial infrastructure.
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, facilities of the public
transport
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is
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 a crucial problem.
People
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 who traveled on public
tranport
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transport
,
they
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considering
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on
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the facilities, which were given by
transport
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 authorities during their travel time.
On
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this
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 argument, most
of
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the
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people
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 feel that the public
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transport's
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facilities
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 not adequate to enjoy the trip.
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, the
transport
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 vehicles, which are
operating
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 by authorities are not
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 adequate space, specially in developing countries.
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,
people
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 who travel on public
transport
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 it is hard to access their accurate place. what
i
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 mean by
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that
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the
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public
transport
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 mostly
running
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 on
main
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the main
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 streets.
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, unable to
rech
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reach
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exact
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the exact
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 location. In conclusion,
ther
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there
 are
certin
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certain
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by
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to
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 using public
transport
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 but
people
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 who
living
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live
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as
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in
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 a
middle class
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family
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families
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 or poor
people
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 are using public
transport
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 in their routine life. To overcome those pros the government should weigh up the pros
among
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the
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public
transport
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 in their countries. If it
happend
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happened
happens
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nation
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have
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chance
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 to satisfy
their
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people
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also
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and also
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 may improve the
economical
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 infrastructure.
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