Task 1; The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1; The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the process of Instant
noodles
on how they are manufactured.
Overall
, the procedure consists of 8 steps which include Storing, Mixing, Cooking ingredients and Labelling of products. To manufacture Instant
noodles
the first step is
to store Flour in Storage Silos and from that storage, flour is taken to the mixing area which
also
contains water and oil. After a thorough mixture of these substances, it is
then
turned into Dough sheets with the help of a roller which is connected to the Mixer.
Next,
to create the shape of the
noodles
, it is
then
put into a machine where it is turned into dough strips followed by, putting the strips into discs, so that it is easier to cook and
then
they are dried in the same area.
Furthermore
, Once the
noodles
are cooked and dried they are submitted to the facility of labelling where vegetables and spices are
also
put into the packages inside the cup. The
last
step is to seal and label the product and
thus
how Instant
noodles
are manufactured.
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