Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements.

Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Aje and I am one of your librarian memberships. I am writing
this
letter to express my suggestion for the facilities in the library. Allow me to explain the details.
Firstly
, The library had more than
thousand
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of
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books
inside, which
are include
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any types of topics we need.
Moreover
, your
libray
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library
had some of the utmost important
books
for me as a medical student.
Secondly
, the
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library
had many
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for us to read the
books
conviniently
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conveniently
. Despite
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this
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good reviews, I have some
point
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that I do not like, which are only
have
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one to two
books
for each
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,
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inadequate
of librarian staff members, and still
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old
computer
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.
Consequently
,
this
issue
need
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to
be improve
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to encourage the facilities and services for us to read insight the library. I kindly ask your help
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adding some copies of
books
and computers because of
this
matter. I would like you to
enchance
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enhance
the
facilites
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facilities
in the future. Yours sincerely, AJe
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