The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Australia Universities in 2001 and 2010

The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Australia Universities in 2001 and 2010
The given table presents data on the secondary and high school
teachers
’ salaries in 5 countries in 2009.
Overall
, the
teachers
in
Luxemburg
were the most paid,
while
teachers
from Australia were the lowest paid. It is
also
evident that the amount of time to obtain maximum
salary
was faster in Demark and slower in
Korea
. The highest starting point of
salary
was in
Luxemburg
, at 80000
dollars
,
while
this
figure for
teachers
from Denmark was slightly lower to 35000
dollars
.
Teachers
from other countries, namely Australia, Japan, and
Korea
, were paid a starting
salary
of around 30000
dollars
.
Then
,
teachers
with 15 years of experience in
Luxemburg
earned 119000
dollars
, compared with the salaries of Japanese and Danish
teachers
with the same amount of experience, 65000
dollars
and 54000
dollars
respectively.
By contrast
, in
this
term,
teachers
from Australia and
Korea
were paid the lowest salaries, at only 48000
dollars
.
Moreover
, at least 10 years are required to reach the maximum
salary
for
teachers
from
Korea
, Japan, and
Luxemburg
, whilst Danish and Australian
teachers
had to wait for less than 10 years
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