The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Australia Universities in 2001 and 2010
The given table presents data on the secondary and high school
teachers
’ salaries in 5 countries in 2009.
Overall
, the teachers
in Luxemburg
were the most paid, while
teachers
from Australia were the lowest paid. It is also
evident that the amount of time to obtain maximum salary
was faster in Demark and slower in Korea
.
The highest starting point of salary
was in Luxemburg
, at 80000 dollars
, while
this
figure for teachers
from Denmark was slightly lower to 35000 dollars
. Teachers
from other countries, namely Australia, Japan, and Korea
, were paid a starting salary
of around 30000 dollars
.
Then
, teachers
with 15 years of experience in Luxemburg
earned 119000 dollars
, compared with the salaries of Japanese and Danish teachers
with the same amount of experience, 65000 dollars
and 54000 dollars
respectively. By contrast
, in this
term, teachers
from Australia and Korea
were paid the lowest salaries, at only 48000 dollars
. Moreover
, at least 10 years are required to reach the maximum salary
for teachers
from Korea
, Japan, and Luxemburg
, whilst Danish and Australian teachers
had to wait for less than 10 yearsSubmitted by nurai_zh06 on
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