Write a letter of discharge to Ms Rudik, the community Nurse, informing her about patient's condition and her medical and social needs.

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Mr Jane Rudik Community Nurse Newtown Community Health Centre Newtown 15 July 2017 Re:

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Mary

Bell

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Age: 66 years Dear

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Rudik, I am writing regarding

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Bell

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, who was admitted to our hospital

due to

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unstable

diabetes

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mellitus followed by a infected neuropathic

wound

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. She is

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be discharged today, 15 July 2017, and will require nursing management and support with social needs. On admission,

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Bell

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reported periodic problems with self administration of medicine. She is currently on Glibenclamide and Metiform for

diabetes

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and now, she's been prescribed Amoxicillin with Clauvulanate for infected

wound

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on her left foot. During her staying, her nursing assessmeent consisted on daily

wound

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dressing with saline solution, antibioticotherapy medication 3 times daily, which she is

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continue at home.

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Bell

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, lives alone with no family or friends around.

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she receives a pension,

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Bell

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complains that the amount of money isn't enough for daily basis and

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she is having problems mantaining good quality of food at home. She reported an increase in achohol intake and very little interest of going out of the house since her retirement.

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Bell

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has an unstable

diabetes

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mellitus

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diabetes

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mellitus, which she struggles to self medicate corrently. I would highly appreciate if you can provide ongoing care for

wound

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healing, medication compliance, and

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support

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Bell

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with her social issues. For the

wound

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healing process, it is recommeded daily dressing, cleaned with saline water. Please note that the margin of the ulcer needs to be closely monitored. Regarding to her social challenges,

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Bell

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would benefit of a referral to your community social worker, which I belive would be the right person to provide insights on realistic income from producing activities at home. If you have any quiries, please contact me. Kind Regards, Nurse

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

306 words

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Write a letter of discharge to Ms Rudik, the community Nurse, informing her about patient's condition and her medical and social needs.

Structure your letter

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