The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the weekly spending by the people of each country on various 8 different items in 1968 and 2018.
However
,calculations had been mentioned in percentage (%).
Overall
it is clear that
the spending on Food,Fuel,Clothing and Personal
goods
has declined over fifty years
while
household
goods
expenses remained the same.
However
, Transport and Leisure's figures have increased over time. In terms of spending money on Food percentages have declined much approximately became halved in 2018 from 30% to about 15% in comparison with Housing rents which have increased around about 10% over 50 years
while
Clothing and Personal
goods
both reduced much by half decade from 10% to 5% and from about 8% to 4% respectively.
On the other hand
, Household
goods
have been remaining the same since 1968 (about 7%)
whereas
Transport has a sharp increase of approximately 8% and Leisure spending is the only item
that is
increased dramatically more than double from around about 8% to 22%.
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