Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Testing on
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is an extremely controversial matter since many people argue that it should be banned
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others believe it is essential to increase our knowledge in different fields. In
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of
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and present an alternative. There are a few reasons for thinking that
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type of scientific activity should be outlawed. First of all,
animals
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are not different from humans, so they should have the same chance to live their own life
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, international statistics say that some companies could bypass the use of
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in their research.
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, these kinds of
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allow us to cope with different problems connected with our health. Indeed, scientists can observe
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’ behaviours and understand what happens during determinate circumstances.
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, thanks to discoveries, some diseases could be fought or, at least, it has been possible
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a more effective way to combat them. Nowadays,
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develop of technology,
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of
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animals’
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tests can be adopted.
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, it should be possible to reproduce some parts of our body with a 3D printer, and
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simulate certain situations using artificial intelligence.
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but not least, in some cases it may be feasible to ask for help from volunteers.
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, it makes sense for specific trials against cancer or rare illnesses. In conclusion, I believe that our society should do every effort to improve our knowledge, in order that we can save more lives.
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, to achieve
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if it is avoidable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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