The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
P O 2 D The diagram
ilustrares
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illustrates
the life
cicle
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cycle
of an
insect
call
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lady bird
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ladybird
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. We could
also
identify in the diagram the
differents
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parts of the
insect
.
Overall
the life cycle
have
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four steps, starting with the egg
stage
y finishing as an adult
stage
. About the
anatomy
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it could be observed that the
insect
have
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has
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a complex
estructure
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structure
.
Firstly
les talk about the life
cicle
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cycle
of the
lady bird
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ladybird
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. The egg
stage
starts in a leaf. The process takes between 3 to 5 days to be completed.
Then
the larva is born. During
this
stage
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the larva
have
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has
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around 21 days to survive in
the
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nature.
After
this
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the larva
have
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to find a leaf to start the pupa
stage
.
This
steps
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step
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takes around 7 days to
be
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complete.
At the end
of the
last
day
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the adult
lady
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ladybug
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bug
is born.
Secondly
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I will describe the anatomy of
this
new adult
lady
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ladybug
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bug
. The biggest
part
of the
insect
is the Elytra, which has the red característica colour of
this
bug
. Under
this
red
part
are two important parts, the winds and de abdomen.
Another
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important
part
of
the
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insect
are
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their
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legs and eyes.
This
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two parts help the
bug
to navigate through nature. The
antenas
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antennas
are in the head of the
insect
, very close to the
the
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eyes. The
last
part
of the of
th
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the
insect
is the Promotum, between the head and the Elytra.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words insect, lady, stage, bug, part with synonyms.
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