The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram
ilustrares
the life Correct your spelling
illustrates
cicle
of an Correct your spelling
cycle
insect
call
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called
lady bird
. We could Correct your spelling
ladybird
also
identify in the diagram the differents
parts of the Correct your spelling
different
insect
. Overall
the life cycle have
four steps, starting with the egg Change the verb form
has
stage
y finishing as an adult stage
. About the anatomy
it could be observed that the Add a comma
,anatomy
insect
have
a complex Correct subject-verb agreement
has
estructure
.
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structure
Firstly
les talk about the life cicle
of the Correct your spelling
cycle
lady bird
. The egg Correct your spelling
ladybird
stage
starts in a leaf. The process takes between 3 to 5 days to be completed. Then
the larva is born. During this
stage
the larva Add a comma
,stage
have
around 21 days to survive in Change the verb form
has
the
nature. Correct article usage
apply
After
this
the larva Add a comma
,this
have
to find a leaf to start the pupa Change the verb form
has
stage
. This
steps
takes around 7 days to Change the determiner
step
be
complete. Unnecessary verb
apply
At the end
of the last
day
the adult Add a comma
,day
lady
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ladybug
bug
is born.
Secondly
I will describe the anatomy of Add a comma
,Secondly
this
new adult lady
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ladybug
bug
. The biggest part
of the insect
is the Elytra, which has the red característica colour of this
bug
. Under this
red part
are two important parts, the winds and de abdomen. Another
important Correct quantifier usage
Other
part
of the
Correct article usage
apply
insect
are
Change the verb form
is
their
legs and eyes. Correct pronoun usage
its
This
two parts help the Change the determiner
These
bug
to navigate through nature. The antenas
are in the head of the Correct your spelling
antennas
insect
, very close to the the
eyes. The Remove the redundancy
apply
last
part
of the of th
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the
insect
is the Promotum, between the head and the Elytra.Submitted by jorgederecho on
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