The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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P O 2 D The diagram

ilustrares

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illustrates

the life

cicle

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cycle

of an

insect

call

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called

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lady bird

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ladybird

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. We could

also

identify in the diagram the

differents

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different

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parts of the

insect

Overall

the life cycle

have

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four steps, starting with the egg

stage

y finishing as an adult

stage

. About the

anatomy

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it could be observed that the

insect

have

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has

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a complex

estructure

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structure

Firstly

les talk about the life

cicle

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cycle

of the

lady bird

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ladybird

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. The egg

stage

starts in a leaf. The process takes between 3 to 5 days to be completed.

Then

the larva is born. During

this

stage

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the larva

have

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has

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around 21 days to survive in

the

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apply

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nature.

After

this

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,this

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the larva

have

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has

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to find a leaf to start the pupa

stage

This

steps

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step

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takes around 7 days to

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complete.

At the end

of the

last

day

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,day

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the adult

lady

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ladybug

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bug

is born.

Secondly

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,Secondly

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I will describe the anatomy of

this

new adult

lady

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ladybug

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bug

. The biggest

part

of the

insect

is the Elytra, which has the red característica colour of

this

bug

. Under

this

red

part

are two important parts, the winds and de abdomen.

Another

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important

part

the

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apply

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insect

are

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their

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its

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legs and eyes.

This

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These

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two parts help the

bug

to navigate through nature. The

antenas

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antennas

are in the head of the

insect

, very close to the

the

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eyes. The

last

part

of the of

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the

insect

is the Promotum, between the head and the Elytra.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words insect, lady, stage, bug, part with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

241 words

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