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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem

#work #street #noise #complaint #council
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Cuttareeya Rassameerattayatham. I am living in the Richmond area, and my address is 203 Punt Road, apply the same road that is closing at the moment. I am writing
this
 letter in order to complain about the noise at
night
, that it makes me could not sleep
last
night
. In the first place,
this
 road has been
maintenance
Replace the word
maintained
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 since
last
 month,on March 27th, and It was fine until
last
night
 as the sound from knocking is too loud ,and a noise contributed by
constructor
Correct article usage
the constructor
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 as well.
Consequently
, I would like to suggest if your project could work day time only in order to reduce our stress at
night
 time. I would be very grateful if you could consider my suggestion. I hope
this
 situation will be improved as soon as possible. Thank you for giving the matter your attention, and I hope to hear your reply soon Sincerely, Cuttareeya
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