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Nowedays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why mught this be the case? What could be the disdavantages of being self-employed?

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It is true that many individuals prefer to
work
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 as a
freelancer
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,
instead
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 of working for a
company
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 or organisation. They believe that if they choose to be self-employed, there may be many advantages for them.
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, self-employed have some drawbacks. On the one hand, there are some advantages to being a
freelancer
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 that
cause
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people
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 to resign from their
work
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.
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, in terms of
finances
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 if
people
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work
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 for a
company
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, they receive a salary that they got agree to .
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, the revenue that comes from working as a self-employed may be much more than they get from a
company
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.
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, a data scientist might get $100k from the
company
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 he/she works
in
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 a year,
while
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 he/she can receive
this
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 money from a project over two or three months.
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, in some
organisations
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 there are many rules that staff cannot be free as much as they want.
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, employees have to be in the office at 9 o'clock, and if they are late, they have been punished or they cannot allow wearing casual clothes. Some regulations like these can affect employees to resign from their
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 and start their own businesses with their own regulations.
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, being self-employed have many drawbacks. One of the most important issues about working as a
freelancer
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 is the
work
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pressure
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 is too high that you have to handle
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pressure
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, because when you sign a contract with a customer you put the
pressure
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 on yourself to do the job in the best way. Because if the quality of the project has not high, you may not
work
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 again with that customer.
People
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 sometimes have to
work
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 more than eight hours, so in the long term health problems
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 as heart disease or blood
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 may happen. Another issue is that the self-employed do not have fixed salaries, so it is hard to manage bills and expenditures. In conclusion, there are some reasons in terms of financial and
company
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 culture that
people
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 want to be self-employed, rather than
work
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 for a
company
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. Controversially, there are many disadvantages
of
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 being a
freelancer
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.
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