The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The given line graph illustrates the average
number
of travellers on a Caribbean island who had stayed in different locations (on cruise ships or on island
) and the total Add an article
the island
an island
number
of them in 7 years period from 2010 to 2017.
From an overall
perspective, the total number
of visitors had grown in the given duration. Although
at first reports more people had chosen to stay on the island, in the last
year more tourists decided to spend their time on cruise ships.
The number
of people who had stayed on the cruise ship was nearly a quarter of a million
in 2010. The figure then
fluctuated and increased in 2011 to half of a million
and again downwards to its last
report in 2010 ( 0.25 million
). Afterwards faced quiet growth reaching a peak of over 2 million
in 2017.
On the other hand
, in 2010, the number
of individuals who had preferred to stay on the Caribbean islands was approximately twice in
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number
than
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of
However
, this
trend reversed entirely in 2017. All in all, the total number
of travellers to this
zone had grown dramatically from only a million
in 2010 to a greater level in 2017 with 3.5 million
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