You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, - describe the situation - explain your problems and why it is difficult to work - say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my situtation
in the Correct your spelling
situation
share
dorm. The Change the verb form
shared
situtation
here had been very Correct your spelling
situation
chaos
. I have Replace the word
chaotic
encounter
some Change the verb form
encountered
distruption
when I try to study in my Correct your spelling
disruption
share
dorm.
At Correct your spelling
shared
first,
My room-mate
is play Correct your spelling
roommate
the
online video games every night Correct article usage
apply
that
make me uncomfortable Correct pronoun usage
which
to sleep
. Every weekend, He and His friends always come to our dorm to party until dawn. I could not get a nice sleep every night since I share Change the verb form
sleeping
this
room. Moreover
, Next term I have a very important exam and It would be a
nice condition if I could Correct article usage
apply
got
a new Change the verb form
get
room-mate
. Correct your spelling
roommate
Therefore
, I kindly suggest could I move to the other room if that's possible I would likely to move as soon as possible. Thanks for reading my letter and I will be waiting for your response.
Yours Faithfully
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.