Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

Dear Sir or Madam, I am your next door neighbour and I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my uncomfortable situation. Your
dog
bark every midnight when I am trying to sleep.
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I have some difficulty when I
trying
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try
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to study for my exam. In the beginning, I am not feeling
unplesant
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unpleasant
if
your
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my
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dog
make
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makes
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a noise during the day.
However
,
In
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the
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night the sound make me couldn't have a good rest.
Moreover
, I have to take a
sleep
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sleeping
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pill
where
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that
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is not recommended by my doctor for
a
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long term.
Therefore
, I kindly suggest you
to
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take your
dog
for a walk or maybe look for a pet trainer so It can be calmer. I have
search
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and attach some
article
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that would help to maintain your
dog
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dog's
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emotion. I think you could consider my suggestion and make
us
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our environment more beautiful. Thank you for reading my letter and I am waiting for your next response. Yours faithfully Hung
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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