The given bar chart illustrates how many males and females played six different sports in English cities during 2012.
The given bar chart illustrates how many males and females played six different sports in English cities during 2012.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that a large number of boys
were playing football and tennis. While
around half of the girls
were interested in swimming. In addition
, Hockey bottom of the list for both genders.
Looking at details regarding the number of boys
, Football was the most favourite sport
for males with 60 persons
playing it. Replace the word
people
Then
the next most attractive sport
of them is Tinnes and accounted for half of the boys
played it. After that swimming and cycling came in turn by 40 and 38 persons did it in 2012. While
Hockey was the most neglected sport
among all and around 10 people did it.
On the other hand
, swimming headed the list for females with 50 of them playing it. Furthermore
, for cycling girls
were less by double than boys
and accounted for 20 individuals of girls
. Besides
, there is a slight difference between boys
and girls
in badminton sport
approximately 10 and 8 persons
respectively.Replace the word
people
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