Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In my opinion, I will say learning
foreign
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language
not only work and travel
language
are
benifit
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benefit
benefits
others side.
For example
, when you go to
this
learning for treatment someone
then
you speak fluently. Generally
speaking
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fluency is most important because if you don'
t
speak clearly
then
you don'
t
solve your
problem
when
face
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a
problem
. if you are going to any
country
then
this
country
's
language
is most important for you for every step.
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World
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most important
language
is
English
.
English
is an international
language
, all countries
are know
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English
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language
. Nowadays,
any
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in any
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country's
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country
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you going
then
you need must
English
language
. A common opinion is that
,
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when you visit a
country
then
you need
this
countries
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country's
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language
. If you don'
t
know
this
,
then
you face a
problem
every
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at every
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step. Foreign
language
is most important when you work
another
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in another
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country
or tour
others
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another
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country
. Every
country's
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countries
country
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must have a
language
,
most
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common is
English
.
First
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you've
English
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the English
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language
because
this
language
is easy and comfortable for everyone. To attest,
others
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other languages
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language
must need when you go abroad.
For example
, when you go to study abroad, you must know
English
and
you
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learn
this
countries
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country's
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language
like
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if
are study
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studies
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in Bangladesh
then
you learn
Bengali
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the Bengali
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language
. If you're don'
t
learn
this
then
you
facing
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face
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problem
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when you stuck in a public place. I must admit that
,
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
must learn when you go to any
country
for any reason. Foreign
language
is need
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is needed
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for both steps. Work and travel
not
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do not
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usage
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use
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only foreign
language
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languages
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every point everything needed
foreign
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a foreign
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language
.
Overall
, I was
say
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saying that
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when you go
to
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apply
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abroad you must learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
. Foreign
language
is important
this peoples
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this people
these peoples
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who are going to foreign
country
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countries
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. If you
known
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know
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
then
you solve
your
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apply
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any problems usage by your
language
.
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