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A few nations let learning institutes advertise about new restaurants and business owners offer them a good amount of money. From my perspective, it is a negative trend as it could have a bad impact on children and the same would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, if schools initiate to promote fast

food

eating places inside the campus it could lead to a big problem. To commence with, it is quite clear that kids are like clay,

in

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an early age, they could be moulded into any shape.

Thus

, if they encounter

with

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fast

food

on a daily basis and eat it regularly,

subsequently

, they could develop

this

habit for their whole life.

However

, they could be at

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risk of high cholesterol and other

health

problems, in fact, they might not be able to manage it financially.

For instance

, in hectic schedules, no one is having enough time to cook for themselves, but childhood habits, would not refrain them from eating unhealthy

food

and let them continue to do it.

Furthermore

,

although

parents would pack healthy meals for their wards,

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they could have

desperate

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urge to eat

food

prepared at their schools. To put it forth, they would not eat home-made

food

afterwards,

whereas

, it could lead to

harmful

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impact on their

health

.

For example

, nowadays, the majority of kids are suffering from

health

problems

such

as obesity as they have been consuming

food

filled with fat and sugar on a daily basis.

Besides

,

this

could lead to problems in their families since guardians would restrict them to consume

such

food

items, whilst children would not pay attention to them. In conclusion, in

this

era, the world

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been suffering physically and financially

due to

wrong eating habits,

consequently

, there is a need to encourage

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to avoid

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over consumption

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.

On the other hand

, if schools would advertise

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such

products, it would have a

deterimental

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detrimental

impact on the

health

of young ones.