İt is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Despite most
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consider that taking a risk
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, in my opinion, there are a lot of advantages of this
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people
realise their wishes by taking a risk
in their lives. For example
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people
in the world. Furthermore
, I think that if someone want
to obtain rewards Change the verb form
wants
such
as promotion or extra earnings and so on, they always have to be ready to take a risk
and do their utmost.
İn addition to these, there are innumerous
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member of the workforce or other society members who are reluctant to venture, because they suppose that their lives collapse. There is even an aphorism related to it Correct article usage
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believe that everyone more often than not to take a Change the capitalization
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risk
and catch a chance so as to improve their life standards. Besides
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employee
or someone did not take a Correct article usage
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risk
at the right moment, they would regret and live with this
feeling in the future.
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