The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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chart shows the

energy

comsuption

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consumption

of an average Australian household and how

propotion

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proportion

promotion

of emitting

greenhouse

gas

in each type of

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.

First,

the most bigger different

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are using heating and other appliances, relate to 42% and 15%, but they going

up side

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down in

gas

emittions

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emissions

, which

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15% and 28%.

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, using

energy

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lighting and refrigeration are similar

change

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in

greenhouse

gas

emittions

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emissions

. The former

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4% and produce

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a double

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number

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of

emittions

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emissions

to 8%. The latter

energy

have the same situation about 7%

in

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using

energy

but emit 14%

greenhouse

gas

. The

last

two parts of things are water heating which is

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large source of

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using

energy

and the smallest

cumsuming

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consuming

energy

one = cooling. Indeed, there

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just a

marginally

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change in

greenhouse

gas

emittions

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emissions

which, grow from 30% to 32% and rise from 2% to 3%.