The given bar chart illustrates how much money was earned from languages-associated occupations in US dollars in five cities.

The given bar chart illustrates how much money was earned from languages-associated occupations in US dollars in five cities.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given bar chart illustrates how much money was earned from languages-associated occupations in US dollars in five cities.
The given bar chart illustrates how much money was earned from languages-associated occupations in US
dollars
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in five cities.
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, what stands
of
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on
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the chart is that interpreters headed the list in
Toronto
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. and it was the highest job related to languages among the five cities.
while
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language teacher bottom of the list in Paris and Munich.
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,
Mexico
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in Mexico
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all mentioned jobs were approximately similar in income. Looking at details regarding the income of interpreters, in
Toronto
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their salary reached its peak and accounted for 80000
dollars
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.
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it saw a slight decrease in Munich by 100000
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less than
Toronto
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.
then
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it was approximately similar in both cities Paries and Dubai by 61000 and 60000
dollars
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annually.
On the other hand
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translator and language tutors were similar in wages in
Toronto
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by 650000
dollars
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every year. Despite increasing salaries in
Toronto
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. their Income
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in Mexico was reduced to its lowest point of 19999
dollars
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.
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, there was some fluctuation in the earnings in Dubai of the three jobs ( interpreter, translator and language teacher) which accounted for 6000, 4000 , and 6000 in turn.
while
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Interpreter and translator's salaries were equal in Paris.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, toronto with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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