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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in aforeign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn aforeign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that part of
society
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 thinks one and only
reason
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 major factor to study a foreign
language
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 is in order to travel to or occupancy in another
country
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. The other part of
society
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 thinks that
reason
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 is not the only basic factor to learn another
language
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. I believe that there are several reasons to learn a foreign
language
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 rather than to travel or work in another
country
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. The essay would discuss both views and explain my opinion. On the one hand, the majority think that if someone wants to migrate , travel or work in another
country
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, they should learn a particular
language
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,
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 they can not survive and communicate with each other.
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reason
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 is completely correct and meaningful.
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, 30% of migrated
people
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 could not manage relevant foreign languages properly and among them, 5% of
people
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 tend to come back to their mother
country
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.
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, the view of most
people
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 in
society
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 is partially correct as a
reason
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.
On the other hand
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, part of
people
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 do not agree only with the
reason
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 because there are a lot of reasons to impact studying another
language
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. Among them, to know another culture and to study the civilizations of another is the main.
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, if meet foreigners suddenly in our mother
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,
people
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 could communicate with them and hospitalize them.
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,
people
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 have adequate
language
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 knowledge about our world and different civilizations, cultures and communication patterns.
To conclude
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, each and every person try to learn foreign languages as much as possible
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 it helps us to show our knowledge to
society
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.
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