A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Jass, I hope you are doing great. It's been a
while
since we met each other. As you already know, I'
m
going out of town for a few weeks
due to
an official trip. So, I'
m
writing
this
letter to give you some information about my house and pet as well. First of all, I want to thank you for helping me in
such
a difficult situation by taking care of my house and pet. Next week, I'
m
travelling to Dubai for a 2-week trip to meet my Uncle and his family, but you can contact me any time at 123-456-7890 if you have any queries.
Moreover
, you just have to feed my dog twice a day as I'
m
not able to bring him with me on holiday and I left his food on the top of the kitchen shelf, it will be easy for you to find it.
In addition
, you can take him for a walk in the nearest dog park during the evening. Apart from that can you please water the plants and check the lights at night? I'll come back home on 25th January 2024. Once again, I would appreciate it for taking care of the house
while
I travelling. Thank you a lot. See you soon and take care. Best regards, Tajinder Singh
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  • moreover
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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