The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The pie gives information about the proportions of moving into or out of the UK in terms of six different reasons(definite job,looking for a job,formal study,accompany or join,no
reason
,and other).
Overall
, the number of for sure jobs was responsible for the most in both immigration and emigration.The less percentages in the causation of moving in and out were no
reason
and studying for a degree. The proportions in the definite jobs were almost the same in the two pies and occupied 30% and 29% in immigration and emigration separately.
Similarly
,The people who moved for no
reason
and for accompany constituted 10% to 15% and has no significant difference in both concepts. In contrast,
while
the second large figure in immigration
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resulted in getting a formal degree by 26%,there were only 4% of people who emigrated for the same
reason
. The percentage of no
reason
saw an apparent difference as well.It made up 18% of the total of emigrants, which was three times larger than immigrants.
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