The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the process of how noodles are produced and stored in paper cups.
From an
overall
perspective, there are 8 steps involved in linear semi-automated manufacturing of instant noodles, starting with storing floors in silos and ending with labelling and sealing cups.
At the first stage
of this
process, floors must be loaded into storage silos from transport trucks. Then
it will be delivered to a mixing machine to be combined with water and oil. Secondly
, rollers will take the dough ( the outcome of the mixer ) to turn them into sheets and will be pushed into a striping machine.
The dough strips will be transformed into noodle dishes and before being taken to cups, they have to be cooked in oil to be dried out. In the next step, ingredients such
as spices and vegetables will be added, and finally
the result will be labelled and sealedAdd a comma
,finally
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