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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdoms, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdoms, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide (co2) per individual in four Different counties
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 for decades. Its unit of measurement is expressed in metric
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
united
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the united
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 kingdom has the highest number of emissions which brought Sweden and Portugal to record the lowest value.
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united kingdom and Sweden witnessed a drop in value. In 1967 the united kingdom started with a value of around 11 metric
tonnes
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 which dropped dramatically to almost 8 in 2006.
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 Sweden began with approximately 9 metric
tonnes
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 in 1967, rose drastically above 10 in 1996
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 plunge to a low Of around 5 in 2007 .
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, Italy and
portugal
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Portugal
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 experience a steady increment . Italy stood at above 4 metric
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 in 1967 with a significant rise of almost 8 metric
tonnes
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 in 2007 . Prutogal followed under that
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Italy in production of emissions per person with its highest record of more than 5 in 2007 over the forty years period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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