The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of
magazines
sold per
person
across five
countries
in the years 2003 and 2005 with a forecast of
sales
in 2007.
Overall
, a higher
number
of
sales
in all three years can be seen in
country
B
.
However
, the lowest
sales
rate can be recorded in
Country
E
each year.
Furthermore
, the
number
of
magazines
sold per
person
experienced a fall in
Country
A,
B
and C.
Whereas
in
Country
D the
number
of
sales
experienced a steady increase and in
Country
E
the
number
of
magazines
sold rose and fell. It can be seen that there is a variation in the
number
of
magazines
in the five different
countries
.
In
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Country
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A and
B
are the only
countries
where in 2003 the
sales
were over 40
magazines
per
person
. Even if the assumption is that the
number
of
magazines
sold per
person
declines to 38 in County A and 45 in
Country
B
it still will be the highest recorded
sales
in contrast
to
Country
C, D and
E
.
In addition
, the only year where an increase in two
countries
can be recorded is 2005. Both
Country
D with growth of eighteen to twenty and County
E
with 4 to 7 sold
magazines
per
person
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, magazines, person, countries, sales, country, b, e with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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  • Increases
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  • Future Trends
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