The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of magazines
sold per person
across five countries
in the years 2003 and 2005 with a forecast of sales
in 2007.
Overall
, a higher number
of sales
in all three years can be seen in country
B
. However
, the lowest sales
rate can be recorded in Country
E
each year. Furthermore
, the number
of magazines
sold per person
experienced a fall in Country
A, B
and C. Whereas
in Country
D the number
of sales
experienced a steady increase and in Country
E
the number
of magazines
sold rose and fell.
It can be seen that there is a variation in the number
of magazines
in the five different countries
. In
Change preposition
apply
Country
A and Add a comma
,Country
B
are the only countries
where in 2003 the sales
were over 40 magazines
per person
. Even if the assumption is that the number
of magazines
sold per person
declines to 38 in County A and 45 in Country
B
it still will be the highest recorded sales
in contrast
to Country
C, D and E
.
In addition
, the only year where an increase in two countries
can be recorded is 2005. Both Country
D with growth of eighteen to twenty and County E
with 4 to 7 sold magazines
per person
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, magazines, person, countries, sales, country, b, e with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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