ountries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In line with the shift in time, there are growing concerns about an increase in similarity among various countries over the world.
While
there are a lot of people who claim that this
phenomenon is a positive development, i
believe that there are a number of drawbacks behind Change the capitalization
I
this
trend.
To begin
with, it is no wondering
that availability of various Replace the word
wonder
products
could enhance consumers' convenience. This
seems to stem from the fact that it made easier
for travellers to purchase their Correct pronoun usage
it easier
necessity
without depending on the location Fix the agreement mistake
necessities
due to
the wide range of convenient stores existed
in various places. On top of that, sharing Correct pronoun usage
that existed
similiar
Correct your spelling
similar
products
contributes to the
mutual understanding Correct article usage
apply
over
the world. Change preposition
of
it is clear that
using same
goods and Correct article usage
the same
product
could help many people coming from different backgrounds connect with each other, which might lead to a potential Fix the agreement mistake
products
tolerant
and harmony. Replace the word
tolerance
However
, it is opnly
valid to a certain extent.
Correct your spelling
only
On the other hand
, Correct article usage
a lost
lost
of Replace the word
loss
cutural indentity
would appear if various Correct your spelling
cultural identity
contries
continued to share the same Correct your spelling
countries
products
to consume. the primary reason behind this
could come from the fact that using the
Correct article usage
apply
similiar
Correct your spelling
similar
products
such
as clothes, drinks, and something along those lines, could decrease the demand in
consuming traditional goods. For Change preposition
for
instace
, since a lot of fast food restaurants became globalized, the number of individuals who consume fast food, especially teenagers and early Correct your spelling
instance
adolescence
, rapidly rose in recent years, which was higher Replace the word
adolescents
that
the number of people who chose traditional meals. On top of that, Correct your spelling
than
this
trend could have a negative impact on Correct article usage
the environmnet
environmnet
. Correct your spelling
environment
It is clear that
there are a variety of facilities were
built in these modern days, which could emit a sheer amount of pollution, waste and carbon dioxide into the environment. Unnecessary verb
apply
this
phenomenon not only affects to
the environment but Change preposition
apply
also
ecological
balance could be influenced, since numerous Add an article
the ecological
constuctions
cut down a lot of plants and places, Correct your spelling
constructions
construction
where
Correct word choice
that
is
Change the verb form
are
habitants
of many species, Correct your spelling
habitats
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
affect
Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
on
the Change preposition
apply
foana
diversity. in Correct your spelling
fauna
other word
, ecological balance and traditional Change the wording
another word
other words
value
could be affected Fix the agreement mistake
values
due to
the similarity.
after considering this
issue, i
have come to the conclusion that even Change the capitalization
I
this
phenomenon provides many advantages to the human race, Correct word choice
though this
i
support the idea Change the capitalization
I
that
is
actually has a bad influence on various aspects, including environment and traditional diversity.Correct your spelling
it
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