The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.

The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.
The pie charts illustrate the data on
three
different elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of
three
various nutrition schedules named an average
diet
, a healthy program and a healthy
diet
for training. From the overview, it is crystal clear that food
contained
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glucose was the most preferable one for all
three
kinds of
diet
,
while
by contrast
fat had been noted as the least chosen category. In terms of the most significant feature of the charts, sugar-contained food was by far highly preferred for all
three
types of food, as it especially made up healthy
table
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for sportsmen(accounting for 60%).
Moreover
, for just
healthy
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a healthy
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menu it compiled 50% of the list. Regarding
towards
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the rest of the information, the next major segment of these
nutritment
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nutriment
lists was protein which mostly was preferred on
average
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an average
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diet
(rated at 40%).
Furthermore
, in
a
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stark
contrast
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the least
choise
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choice
preference for these provisions was fat which rated at between 15-20%.
However
, when added together, the two categories(protein and fat) made up half of
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the
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healthy
diet
menu.
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