Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuas to solve this problem?

The
last
two centuries saw a
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increase in the
use
of
plastic
products,
such
as bags, bottles and
packging
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packaging
as an
efficent
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efficient
way to transport and keep all
sort
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of
good
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goods
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.
However
, all these
plastic
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plastics
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have become a huge problem to
environment
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the environment
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because not only
they
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take thousands of years to decay but
also
they increase
the
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polution's
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problems.
Plastic
products after being used become garbage which causes
as
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lot of
damages
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damage
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to
environment
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the environment
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. Many people throw away their
plastic
bottles or bags in the oceans, rivers and lakes.
This
behaviour is the main cause of
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of many fishes around the world.
Furthermore
, they
polute
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pollute
the reefs, beaches and other areas for many centuries. In order to reduce
this
problem governments should take some attitudes. First of all, they should
prohibite
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prohibit
prohibited
the
use
of
plastic
in the
manufactoring
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manufacturing
of all
kind
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of things.
Secondly
, they should
estimulate
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stimulate
estimate
the research of other methods of packing and
also
estimulate
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estimate
the
use
of other packings that are easier to decay,
such
as paper.
Finally
, they should tax people who
polute
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pollute
the environment more severely.
In addition
, each individual should do their part to reduce
this
problem as well. People in general should avoid the
use
of
plasic
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plastic
products and mainly,
the
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they
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should throw them away in the correct places and not in places where it will cause environmental problems. In conclusion,
it is clear that
the damages caused by the
use
of plastics overweight their benefits and governments and the public
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should
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make
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an effort to solve
this
issue, each one in their area of action.
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