The government should encourage industries and business to move out of big cities and into reginal areas. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

Manifacturals
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Manufacturers
Manufactures
and
Business
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shiuld
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should
motivated
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be motivated
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by the government to be constructed in
a
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apply
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countryside and rural
area
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areas
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instead
of
a large
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a large city
large cities
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cities
.
i
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believe that the merits
outwight
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outweigh
the drawbacks
,
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apply
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because In
people
in rural are
sufering
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suffering
from
lack
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a lack
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of
product
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products
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and job
opportunity
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opportunities
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. on the one hand, when
the
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apply
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huge factories
moving
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move
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into
antother reginal
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another regional
place it
create
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creates
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a significant effect on the
people
there who are requiring a job.
this
because in that
places
several individuals
are tend
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tend
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to
travilling
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travelling
to a huge
citiy
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city
to find a suitable occupation with an appropriate salary to survive.
for instance
, A study conducted by USA University that
isa
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is
around 60% of
people
in
Indea
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India
prefere
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prefer
moving to the city
center
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centre
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( New Delhi) in order to find a
jop
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job
. so that,
government
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the government
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should support all Business in
larg
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large
cities
to move into the rural and regional
places
.
furthermore
,
this
advantage will assist of mitigate
over
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population
on
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in
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larg
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large
larger
cities
, since
people
who seeking
for
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apply
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jobs will distribute in many
places
and
this
will create a
balancing
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balance
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among
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between
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the
people
in the
cities
and regional
places
.
as
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a
resule
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result
, both of them will gain a
confertable
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comfortable
life standard without
overpopulotion
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overpopulation
.
on the other hand
, the main drawback is losses of employment for the
larg
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larger
large
cities
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city
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residents.
this
because
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is because
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major of
people
who are living already in
cities
reling
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relying
on
those business
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that business
those businesses
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.
as
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a result of moving to a
diffirent
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different
place, those
people
will
suffering
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suffer
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from unemployment.
nevertheless
,
the
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they
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will tend to
chang
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change
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their life
caree
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career
care
.
beside
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besides
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, they can reskill
themselfs
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themselves
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in order to get
an new occupations
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a new occupation
new occupations
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in
diffirent
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different
sector
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sectors
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. in conclusion,
in
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from
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my
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perspective
prespective
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,prespective
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i
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I
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belive
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believe
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there
is
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are
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enormous
jop
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job
opportunities in
cities
and
any one
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anyone
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can get a
jop easly
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job easily
in contrast
those
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to those
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in regional spots,
finifing
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finding
finishing
fining
job
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a job
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is really tough. so that, the merits
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are outweighted
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outweighted
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outweighed
by
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apply
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the drawbacks.
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