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plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problems?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #governments #individuals
The population of
people
 who want to keep our world surrounded by a polluted
environment
 has surprisingly increased since Covid-19. Most
people
 think that using non-recycled products in daily life is dangerous for the
environment
.  A result of a study from The University of Vancouver team announced that all items related to
plastic
 and made of
plastic
 can not disappear on the ground.
Hence
, It can result in global warming. we are already suffering from global warming as chaotic weather all season, if we do not have the mind to change our bad habits for the
environment
, the climate will reach extremely hot temperatures and will be changed into a desert everywhere in the future. To prevent global warming, there are many ways governments and individuals. First of all, The government can carry out a policy of using paper
bags
instead
 of
plastic
bags
 in a restaurant and a supermarket.
For example
, In Vancouver, The government declared that
people
 can not use
plastic
bags
 to take out.
Second,
people
 take some eco-friendly goods like eco
bags
 when they go to the grocery store to buy something and their own container which can take out some food from a restaurant,
also
, their own bottles for taking their drinks in a cafe. Some
people
 can feel uncomfortable grabbing some environmental items on a daily with the behaviours mentioned above. But I think If we want to live forever in good conditions of the
environment
, we have to change our conservated habits which can horrible impact on our lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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